Anyway,
I was just thinking about how we could
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I mean, water is free isn’t it? Even if you’re not sure about
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What I mean to say is, we could just grab a glass of water together and
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I was just thinking, what will we lose if we got together and enjoyed some
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You know, I’ve been feeling like maybe
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You see, maybe we’re not that different just like
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Well, I’ve always thought of you as a spice, something sweet, something
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Actually, I don’t know many spices but
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Yeah, so, you might remind me of
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Hey, so, I had pumpkin pie the other day and I could really taste
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I guess cinnamon is what it is, what you
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No, I don’t usually get coffee but the other day I had a cinnamon
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I don’t know if you’ve ever heard of it before but
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It’s strange, the other day I
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I’ve been thinking, and in a personality quiz thing I might describe myself as
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Have you ever heard of cardamom? It’s a spice and
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Cardamom can be used in cooking, for sweet dishes, it’s really
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Funny how similar two spices can be huh?
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please please please give me feedback on this one. perfectly honest and brutal feedback.
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like it, particulary the rythm...huh?
ReplyDeleteI have one tiny little quibble; in the last line I'd like a comma before 'huh' just to give that little breath and sense of rhythm. So honest and forthcoming. I like it.
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